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I have some extra foreshadowing for Another Apple sleep experiment.For example: the lock on the lab's door is broken despite Twilight saying it is a magical lock and Applejack couldn't have had the strength to do it because she is described as looking like she hadn't ate in a long time.

• Twilight wonders how Applejack escaped the prison hinting that somepony must have helped.
  • Neither Rarity nor Twilight (after waking up from being unconscious) or Rainbow Dash don't know about the fire at Sugarcube Corner hinting that the events aren't happening on the same night.

Trolls Band Together

• Five-Second Foreshadowing: After Floyd is revived and Branch moves his arms, the process to restore Floyd's life essences pauses until Branch hugs him and the rest of their brothers join in. It shows that a Troll can have their life essences restore if another shares the same blood, as Branch, John Dory, Spruce, Clay and Floyd are brothers who have the same DNA. However, it doesn't completely restore Floyd's hair, as some parts of it were still white.

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Edited by Arivne on Aug 15th 2024 at 9:45:30 AM

I'll make it changes side to Lex Luther.

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"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."

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I'm sorry, but I can't understand what you wrote. I can't even make a guess as to what you mean, so I can't correct it.

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One group loves it...together before, <- no period and that...should have stayed apart, <- comma as...

@K Boult

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@Blue Sparkles

However, it doesn't completely restore Floyd's hair, as some parts of it are still white.

^ Changed verbs to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.

Thanks Arivne.

Fan-Preferred Couple cleanup thread

YMMV.Peanuts:

• Broken Base: The football gag is either an iconic Running Gag that shows how hapless Charlie is or an overdone joke that stopped being funny long ago and is just mean to Charlie Brown. Even Schulz ended up lamenting how he never let him kick the ball in the strips.
• Foe Yay Shipping: Despite Charlie and Lucy's...less than pleasant relationship in canon, there are some fans who ship them, primarily due to fans enjoying their dynamic and them being the leading guy/girl in the franchise. It helps that the animated specials do occasionally lean into it at times.
• Fanfic Fuel: Given the elusive and deliberately interpretive nature of the Little Red Haired Girl/Heather, it's no surprising that she provides a ton of fuel for fanfiction, many of which expand on her characterization and her relationship with the rest of the cast.
• Fanon: One common fan interpretation of the Little Red Haired Girl/Heather is that she not only reciprocates Charlie's feelings for him, but haplessly pines for him just as much as he does for her.

Edited by Tylerbear12 on Aug 16th 2024 at 12:50:41 PM

Now, How about this? are this description are more understandable? thank you.

The revelation that the Batcomputer is knowing everything about the Batwheels is a case of fridge horror. For instance, In "When You're A Jet", The surprise that it seems to know Batwing's intentions when she seeks the motherboard; is chilling.

And I have one, for trope of 'The Fourth Wall Will Not Protect You' in Kung Fu Panda.

The Fourth Wall Will Not Protect You: after Shifu has been notified by Oogway about his vision: Oogway informs Tai Lung's return. then, Shifu starts briefly imagine about Tai Lung has been escaped - Tai Lung directly clawing at and then approaching the camera.

Characters.Tokyo Xanadu Morimiya City

• Nice Job Fixing It, Villain: While Shiori's plan to make Kou live in a "lie" has some effect on him by making him work many jobs, it also made him gain new perspectives and meet new people (among them, the members of XRC). This ends up biting her back when they decide to defeat her and later on, bring back the real Shiori.

Random Avatar Month Day 17: Reedio

I'll correct the extra foreshadowing and correct and add more by correcting that Mr Cake doesn't glare at Pinkie but angrily shirks her away as he mourns his wife's death and Pound fights and bites her while she's trying to save him from the fire not after.

Neither Rarity,Twilight(after regaining consciousness) nor Rainbow mention the fire at Sugarcube Corner, hinting that it is not the same evening.

Another clue that Apple Bloom is alive is in the audio reading image, you can see a flash of red and yellow when lightning strikes at the mention of her name, hinting that Apple Bloom is nearby.

In the beginning of chapter one,Twilight is described as having tired eyes and Pinkie, not only is mentioned to have been baking non-stop for three days, and in the audio reading image, she appears tired looking with bags under eyes and her mane a mess.

For Unico: Awakening Nightmare Fuel

• Marusu getting tortured by Venus in order to get further information on the mysterious powers from Unico. When the sphinx child resists, the goddess uses her powers as a form of whip until Marusu reluctantly answers her question in a series of riddles. After she becomes exhausted over using her third eye, Venus tells her "She's not done with her yet" as we get a P.O.V. Shot of Marusu getting blasted by Venus' powers. Sphinx's daughter is even shown with visible burn marks on her back.
• After Unico transforms Chloe into a human girl for a second time where she meets Byron. She slowly starts becoming comfortable over being human instead of a cat. Unlike the original, the way Chloe begs him to extend her time as a human is portrayed in a somewhat creepy and mildly unhinged. At one point, we get a close up shot of Chloe's eyes with Unico's reaction being being unsettled over it. After he extends it, Unico decides to look at his own reflection in a lake with Unico's reflection becoming distorted.
• After Venus becomes enraged over Unico transformed into an adult unicorn. We get a brief scene of Marusu who appears to have passed out over getting tormenting by Venus.

For Unico: Awakening

• Arc Symbol: Mirrors and shattered glass are a recurring theme in the reboot series. The 2022 promotional image by Gurihiru shows Unico surrounded by mirrors and shattered glass showing his friends, enemies, and both his past and present actions. Venus herself is constantly surrounded by glass due to her obsessiveness with beauty. A Splash Panel during Volume 1's climax, shows Unico's friends, allies, and family inside shattered mirrors and glass while becoming extra powerful in his adult form.
• Arc Word:
  • "There is a way" is repeated twice in Volume 1. During the prologue, West Wind notices leafs that spell out this word when she's wishing there was a way to end Unico's endless cycle of forgetting his friends and others. After Chloe and Granny are sleeping, we see him somberly staring at the sky while saying to himself "There is a way" while standing outside Granny's house. He's deeply reflecting on his struggles to make the lives of both Granny and Chloe less miserable and uses this line in a different context.
  • "Cats have responsibilities" is uttered by Chloe three times. First when she explains to Jinkins the importance a being a Watch Dog, second when she first witnesses Unico being chase by robbers, and last when Chloe rescues Toast after Byron turns into a monster.
• Clap Your Hands If You Believe: While Unico maintains his ability to transform into a more powerful adult unicorn. Even as a powerful adult unicorn, he still has a difficult time after Byron transforms into a gigantic monster. His powers and strength increases after he hears words of encouragement and love from his friends and allies. This includes characters who didn't gain a proper introduction such as Unico's father, Corn, Chico, and Garappachi and Okuzu who are set to appear in future volumes.

Edited by brb1006 on Aug 16th 2024 at 7:59:17 AM

@Tylerbear 12

Even Schulz ended up lamenting how he never let him kick the ball in the strips.

...since she wasn't meant to be much of <missing text>

@Agent Jet

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@Ayumi-chan

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@K Boult

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Signature Series Arc - Fairy Tail:

• Tower of Heaven Arc, which is considered a high point of the series in terms of action and drama by fleshing out Erza's backstory and character and providing one of the series most memorable moments, such as the first, permnanent onscreen death or Natsu's fight against Jellal.
• Sirius Island Arc is also widely celebrated as the point where manga has truly started Growing the Beard by entering into the clear Myth Arc territory and introducing series' Big Bad Ensemble in Zeref and Acnologia, as well as the series' Breakout Character Mavis, not to mention starting from this arc supporting characters would be given more time to shine and the sheer amount of emotion and action that took place in.
• Tartaros...

I have tear jerker moments in Another Apple sleep experiment.

Apple Bloom explaining how Granny Smith passed away from grief of taking care of her when she was paralysed in her back hooves and a heat stroke suffering Big Mac and from what happened in the Acres.

• Also, her tearfully talking about how Applejack got hurt saving her from a prison guard while trying to help her escape and hasn't woken up since.
  • And lastly, Apple Bloom snuggling Applejack on the bed after killing Twilight, tearfully begging her to wake up and apologizing for not listening to her about letting go of her grudge on Twilight and her friends abandoning Applejack to rot in a prison cell.

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Batman: Caped Crusader

• Low Fantasy: While this show has some supernatural and fantastical elements (such as The Gentlemen Ghost, a Borrowin' Samedi making an appearance, Nocturna’s vampiric powers, etc), it’s still takes place in a more grounded setting compared to most DC works, with both the main heroes and villains being normal humans, with the primary genre being Film Noir due to the 1940s setting.
• Not-So-Harmless Villain: Downplayed regarding Thorne since has always been a notorious mobster and never treated as a joke, but Thorne had loved ones and standards that made him seemed less bad and dangerous compared to the other more immediate villains Batman had to face, while Harvey Dent simply dismisses Thorne’s threats if the former didn’t do what Thorne wanted. Then, Thorne orders Dent’s disfiguration resulting in Dent’s fall from grace and laters orders his death, and by the end of Season 1 Thorne is the one bad guy who gets everything he wanted.
• Underestimating Badassery: Both Batman and Harvey Dent underestimate Thorne’s capabilities and reach has he in Gotham, where they dismiss the threat Throne posses. This backfires on both Batman and Dent, where Thorne has the latter disfigured and killed and eventually succeeds in getting everything he wants, which causes Batman to no longer underestimate Thorne, instead making stopping Thorne his top priority.

Disventure Camp

• Back Stabbing The Alpha Bitch: Ally double crosses Riya once it’s made clear to Ally that Riya was only using her, where Ally eliminates Riya’s sole ally, Grett, when she couldn’t eliminate Riya, due to Riya winning immunity, thus leaving Riya with no allies left in the game.

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